Added floor?

Hi guys I'm sorry to be a pain, but looking back at the brief, I was afraid that what we mocked up on Thursday was not going to be substantial enough for the assignment.

I've mocked up another design - really similar, with an extra floor.

First floor - offices and shared cafe

Ground floor - Retail and supermarket (or other similar large retail)

Basement - carpark

If anyone would like a develop reference i was trying to channel the Hive shopping centre on Victoria Street Abbotsford which has an Aldi and a Woolworths with some mixed retail.

I've uploaded what I drew into our Google Docs folder. Please let me know what you think.

Trish.